Reddit, how do you think I can improve my senior project?

My senior venture is an environmental coverage analysis heart in Little Tokyo, Los Angeles. It’s objective is to be a brand new west-coast headquarters for the Pure Sources Protection Council whose program is personal workplaces and analysis are for NRDC staff and public house to interact to group with the mission of the NRDC.

I simply had my midterm overview bought some actually useful suggestions. The primary critiques had been:

-The double loaded hall in the primary bar is overwhelming and it'd be higher to have two corridors operating alongside the sting of the constructing for folks strolling to absorb the views from either side of the constructing with paths between them.

-To not block Barbara Kreuger's essential mural on the north facet of the Geffen MOCA with the portion of my constructing that’s presently overlaying it. The message of this mural is tied to the political mission of my constructing so I ought to lower of the portion blocking it and transfer the 2 protruding bars westward is it will likely be highlighted higher.

II ought to ramp up the sustainability techniques employed with my constructing. They really useful pure air flow (I assumed, possibly cooling towers as nicely?), wooden over metal (they mentioned it's extra sustainable. Though I wished to make use of metal because it's extremely recyclable, extends the lifecycle of my constructing, and goes together with my theme of desirous to repurpose the economic typology discovered on this space of LA for the mission of the surroundings), and extra integrating water as a system (so, not only a reflective pool surrounding my water exhibit however a rainwater assortment system that presumably takes that reflective pool additional to a river meandering inside my inside courtyard)

-They really useful that there be extra confrontation between private and non-private. At present, the one mixing place for them could be the courtyard, and parts of the higher flooring as administration is surrounded by public library/exhibition house/maker house.

-They thought my sparse landscaping was humorous and "Simpsons-like" (I can positively agree on that one haha) and really useful I copy the landscaping of a well-known panorama architect like Roberto Burle Marx or one other of his contemporaries that I can't bear in mind.

I understand how many nice professionals, college students, and even educated laypeople are on this sub. I’d prefer to humbly request that you just critique/roast tf out of my venture so I could make it the very best senior venture I presumably can.

When you have the time you’re prepared to spare.